Brief story board of "Missed the bus" Pixelation

First Attempt - Close camera angle
Hopefully you can tell I followed my story board right until the end, after learning that I might need a better composition or a different camera angle to let more natural light in the shot.
I decided to change the destination to the other bus stop slightly down the road, I then discovered the long view composition (Subject walking into frame) which I really like. Also the movement of the tripod from right to left when the frame is focused on the watch is also something I really like from this clip. The side shot of the watch gives a real emphasis of 'time'.
Her Morning Elegance - Oren Lavie
Assets: choreographed, ariel shot, neutral colours, people, pixelation, textile, tonal, natural lighting, camera, stop motion.
Pixelation animations use real life actors instead of objects.